@ akanksha – Liked the part that you highlighted the steps to be taken. Overall its a good way to present the case. Nice analysis. What you could have done better is added some numbers to go ahead with it. You could have assumed some X figure to be raised and how you planned to generate revenue.

Good an impressive analysis of the company. Thing I liked is you hv good grap on data. Thing I disliked you missed the part on giving favorable rating. +3

Good analysis. Brought few dimensions and view points +4

@ arathi well structured approach with examples + 3 . Few statistics can help. Liked the overall methodology and articulation

@ skill good example of root cause analysis. Well done + 2